Hey guise, I've noticed that a lot of people, including myself, are enjoying the stories posted by people on the forum. I realized that I had one that a made a while back, so I decided i'd post it on here. It's a creepy pasta based story, and originally it was ment for an audience that doesn't completely get cars, so theres a bit of a lack of detail, like using shorter car names like BMW M3 rather then adding the year or E30 and stuff like that. I don't have time to change it atm, so sorry about the lack of detail. Anyway, enjoy
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A man come's back from a hard day at work. He was tired, and didn't feel like doing anything extremely active, so he popped in his Forza 4 disc, got his racing wheel (the xbox wheel) and started playing. He was a bit short on good cars, so he went on the auction house (buy sell cars auction style) to get a new car. As it was loading, he noticed that it was taking longer than usual to load. When it loaded up, he noticed that only one car came up. It was a blue heavily tuned 1969 Nissan Fairlady Z. It was weird that only one car came up, as the screen would normally be filled with cars of all kinds. To him it was a good thing though, as he really liked this car. When he entered the car auction page, he was shocked to see there were no bids, and no seller. Thinking this was a glitch, he popped out into the auction listings, which remained empty apart from the Z, then back to the cars page. It still had no bids, which in he thought would be weird considering it's the only car on the normally busy house at the time, and still had no owner. In the place of where the name should be was a white box, almost like when someone trying to blank something out. He thought this was very odd, but the weirdest thing was the price, the buyout was 0 dollars/Cr. He without thinking it through he quickly got the car; worried that someone else would have taken this deal. He was really excited to use the car, but when he got into his garage his mood changed. Every single car had been removed from his garage, except for the Z. He was first shocked, then angry. Although his understanding of forza hacks was small, he did know it was possible, and things like money and speed hacks are possible, but he'd never heard of a hack that deletes your cars. He started thinking that who ever sold the car to him covered up his name, than took all of his other cars kind of like a forced trade. Annoyed by the thought of it, he realized he had nothing else to do but try out the car. Checking out the stats, he noticed that the top speed was a lot higher then he's seen on cars of the same name. (There was a lot more things like an SR20 engine swap, which isn't possible in the game and stuff like that, but it might confuse people if I go into detail)
He knew that there was no way a car like this could reach speeds like this. It's obviously a hacked car, but from the outside everything seems normal, so he thinks he can use this car online and beat a lot of unsuspecting people and make his money back. He starts to think things may be good with this, so he pops on a drag race, picks the Z and starts a solo race. When the game loaded, music had been turned on, even though he had it off most of the time.
The song that was playing sounded like this song in the link:
[You must be registered and logged in to see this link.] '''''('''''It would add to the mood if you used the start of the song to about the 2:00 mark) back to the story though
He'd never turned the music on before, and when he tried to turn it off, only the master volume was there, rather than game music as well. Rather then starting the race instantly, he took a second to listen to the music. The eerie music was playing softly, and he was confused why someone would put such a slow song in a game about racing, but he'd always had the music off, so he had no idea what the music was like normally. He took off down the mile long track and the music seemed to get softer under the engine, almost to the point that he couldn't hear it, except for the beat. The Z was flying down the track at an insane speed, but not fast enough that it would instantly be called a mod online, so it was looking really good.
The car past the quarter mile point, and it was the fastest he’d ever gone. Then all of a sudden, the racing wheel locked to the left, and the car flew into the guardrail. It hit the wall and flipped over twice in the middle of the track, then landed wheels down on the other side of the track. The car was crumpled more than he'd ever seen on any car. Rattled by what happened, he blamed the wheel for the glitch. He then noticed that the song had begun to get louder, until it was as loud as it was at the start. He thought all of this was weird, and when he tried to move his car, it wouldn't move. He knows he didn't put damage on, so something was definitely going on. He tried to turn the wheel, but the wheels didn't react. He couldn't see the driver because the windows were tinted and the view was locked in third person so he couldn’t tell if the driver was turning the in game wheel or not. Thinking this is weird, he tried to quit, but the option was not highlighted so he couldn't click it. The song continued to play, getting softer until it hit an odd note, then stopped and the game quit to the main menu. Thinking this was really weird, he checked his garage and saw that the Z was there, but it wasn't repaired and was still crumpled up like before, and the eerie music was still playing. That was the point he decided to shut off the game, because what was going on was insanely sketching him out, not to mention somebody could be hacking his stuff through the car he bought, and he'd seen enough creepy pasta's to know where this is going. He decided to go on the forums to see if anybody knew about this crazy thing. He posted a new thread explaining the weird stuff that happened like the crash, and buying the car, but he didn't mention the car's name or the fact that it was modified as he hoped to keep the car when the weird stuff passed. Some of the older members began to suggest things like restarting the game, deleting the car, delete any personal info for his profile like credit card numbers as they didn't know the extent of the hack, but the man decided to wait until they came to an agreement on what to do before doing any of them. Then someone posted "what car was it?" The thread went silent for thirty minutes, before another member said "there’s no way it could happen again" Freaked out by this, the man decided his safety was more important than some car that’s modified, so he typed in "it's a blue Fairlady Z 1969" The thread exploded with posts saying "Don't drive in real life!" and "he got the devil Z!" Confused, he asked why he couldn’t drive. A reply had a list of gamer tags of all the people who had got the Z. They had all been killed in car accidents.
Freaked out completely now, he thanked the members for telling him, then went upstairs to go to bed. He wasn't an easily scared man, but he trusted the people on the forum enough to be really creeped out. In the morning, his wife had already left for her work. Wondering why she left so early, he looked at his clock and noticed he was late. He knew he couldn't pull off getting out of work because some people on a forum told him that he can't drive, plus he'd used up all his sick days, meaning he would have to go to a doctor who would obviously say he's not sick. He was one late day from being fired, and he couldn't afford to lose his job over this, so he reluctantly got in his car, as walking, waiting for a cab and a bus would be too slow. He began to pull out of his driveway, sweating like mad. He pulled up to a light, and paranoia was making him tense. As he drove, he began to feel a bit better, as nothing weird was happening. He was making good time, but he knew he'd have to go faster to get there in time. He popped on the highway, and it was empty. He knew he could speed up, with the lack of traffic, so he floored his BMW M3. He was making good time, and his car was going very fast. It might be the fastest he’s ever gotten to work. As he finished that thought in his head, he knew exactly what was going to happen: The radio turned on by it self, and the eerie song began to play. He tried to slam the brakes, but the brakes wern't reacting. He felt the wheel turn to the left, and he slammed into the guardrail, flipped twice, and then landed on the other side of the road. He sat in his chair, barely hanging on to consciousness. Everything had failed on the car, the headlights were out, and so was the engine. The man couldn't move, not that he was trying to, as he was out of energy. Suddenly, the radio came on, playing the song again, even though the radio was cracked. He listened to the song play, and as it approached the end, he shut his eyes. The song hit an odd note, and then stopped. His fuel caught, and the car exploded.
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Hope you enjoyed, and if you noticed any mistakes please tell me :3
Subject: Creepypasta 
Mon Sep 17, 2012 3:28 am
thanks for the comment glad you liked it
